Wednesday, December 12, 2007

Gamyam

aasa nevaithey ...
ala nenavvana ...

teeram neevaithey ...
keratam nenavvana ...

aasa teeraka poyiona ...
kerataniki edabatu tappakapoyina ...
enaleni aa prayatnam loni chiru praanam nenai jeevinchana


ningi neevaithey
nela nenavvana

bhoomi neevaithey
orpu nenavvana

nela ennadu ningi dari cherakapoyina
bhuvi pai pralayam taandavinchina
edategani aa sahanam loni swasa nenai vardillana

swapnam neevaithey
sankalpam nenavvana

samayam neevaithey
sandarbham nenavvana

swapnam teerakapoyina ...
sandarbhaniki samayam kudaraka poyina ...
velakattaleni aa aalochana choope baata nenai Jayinchana


Prayatnam pranamga
Sahanam swasaga
Aalochana baataga
saage jeevitham ... cherunu
gamyam ...

2 comments:

Sanny said...

malli nene first comment :)

once again very nice poem ... but the way explained was even more nice !!! :)

VaRaKal said...

when started reading, thought it was some song.. only later i realized is ur own composition.. a very good one.. :)